The people came to see the Zoo Olympics Games They clapped When the animals came out. The gazelle Won the running race and got a gold medal. Gazelles can run very fast said the people. The kangaroo won the high jump. she got a gold medal too. kangaroos are good at jumping said the people. The sea lion won the swimming race. The people clapped when the sea lion are good at swimming said the people. The hippopotamus got a gold medal for winning the tug of war. Hippopotamuses are very strong. well done, Hippopotamus!´´ the people shouted. The elephant got a gold medal for weightlifting and the people clapped. Elephants are good at weightifting´ said people. The story of the Zoo Olympics was in the newspaper. But the story was waong. it said that gazelle won the swimming race. it said that the kangaroo won the tug of war. The newspaper story said that the sea lion won the weightlifting. it said that the hippopotamus won the running race. it said that the elephant got a gold medal for the high jump. The people laughed and laughed at the story. ´´This story will not win a gold medal ´´ they said. ´´This story is all wrong!´´
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Friday, 13 August 2021
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Ha ha good job on the story! It made me laugh and laugh 😆
ReplyDeleteI would have loved to have seen a hippo in a running race, that would have been funny. Great story Yanni
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